Topic: Tips Needed Please (Read 117 times)

socalx · « **on:** April 18, 2006, 08:30:00 PM »

alright tell me what you guys think and how i cand improve it .im kinda of a new b so......

http://www.imgflux.c.../-435468702.jpg

_iffy · « **Reply #1 on:** April 18, 2006, 09:34:00 PM »

ya know what? it's pretty solid.

Just clean up the bottom: the grey's a little choppy under the blue.
I'd say to give those tubes some texture, but i don't know how or what to put on them.

Those are really good speakers.(wire mesh/i assume they're speakers)

good job.

socalx · « **Reply #2 on:** April 18, 2006, 09:42:00 PM »

thanks ill do that

DsAdvocate · « **Reply #3 on:** April 18, 2006, 09:49:00 PM »

Check corners for both speakers...Round them off better so they go with the background design.

Is the blue-ish shadow underneath the main picture centered? I dunno, doesn't seem to me.

Other than that I think you have a pretty solid pic. Good work

socalx · « **Reply #4 on:** April 18, 2006, 09:53:00 PM »

ya i noticed that earlier ill try and fix it but the blue shadow looks centerd to me and i used the ruler to do it

socalx · « **Reply #5 on:** April 18, 2006, 11:07:00 PM »

k i cleaned it up a bit now tell me how it looks

http://www.imgflux.c.../-644723840.jpg

Owtlaw333 · « **Reply #6 on:** April 18, 2006, 11:31:00 PM »

QUOTE(_iffy @ Apr 18 2006, 06:41 PM)

I'd say to give those tubes some texture, but i don't know how or what to put on them.

How about putting bubbles in 'em...? Just a thought. A little more contrast or shadow on them couldn't hurt either... they're a lil flat at the moment.

zeebo · « **Reply #7 on:** April 19, 2006, 01:19:00 PM »

Try using the dodge and burn to for more detail in highlights and shadows. Looks good.

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