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StrictPuppet

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L O T W #5: Poem
« on: January 18, 2007, 12:12:00 AM »

Well I'll kick it so I dont forget like last LOTW


The Journey
 
Incoherent musings

Mistaken nuances
Incomplete tasks
Subliminal thoughts
Seductive glances

Yearning desire
Omnipotent spectre
Unrelenting pursuit
 
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_iffy

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2007, 10:17:00 AM »

All aboard the friend-ship


Decisions can
Overwhelm me
Under your
Charming gaze
Happiness never
Eludes me

Because you
Are a
Great friend
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throwingks

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2007, 11:11:00 AM »

You spelled dutch wrong.

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hamwbone

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2007, 04:46:00 AM »

Blanket of Love

Drowning alive
Under sheets
Tears abundant
Can't breathe
Holding nose

Opening near
Venting covers
Escaped flatulence
Nostrils rejoice

FIN
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wafflez

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2007, 09:46:00 PM »

American Way

So tempting
Unbelievable taste
Pride dying
Eating more
Reason subsided
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Succulent grease
Increasing waist
Zipper broken
Entering diet

Major Breakdown
Ending diet


waalah!
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metaldevil

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #5 on: January 25, 2007, 09:09:00 AM »

Vote now!
Voting deadline: Thursday, February 1


StrictPuppet: The Journey

_iffy: All aboard the friend-ship

hamwbone: Blanket of Love

wafflez: American Way

metaldevil: I'm Cold

Good luck, everyone! beerchug.gif




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wafflez

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #6 on: January 25, 2007, 11:22:00 AM »

hamwbone
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_iffy

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #7 on: January 25, 2007, 02:29:00 PM »

StrictPuppet
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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #8 on: January 25, 2007, 02:31:00 PM »

hamwbone

...yours gave me such a vivid visual laugh.gif it sounds like what I do to my wife...

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StrictPuppet

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #9 on: January 25, 2007, 06:06:00 PM »

That is some awesome work guys....
Following along with his same dark theme from the last LOTW, My vote goes to.....
metaldevil

Its amazing how much can be conveyed in 2 words.
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metaldevil

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #10 on: February 03, 2007, 01:15:00 AM »

We have a tie between hamwbone and StrictPuppet. Tiebreaker (someone that hasn't voted)?
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Modderxtrordanare

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2007, 10:06:00 AM »

Hamwbone
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StrictPuppet

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #12 on: February 04, 2007, 11:15:00 PM »

Congrats, hamwbone.  Your gf/wife is one lucky lady.
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hamwbone

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L O T W #5: Poem
« Reply #13 on: February 05, 2007, 06:28:00 AM »

beerchug.gif  im ready for the next one!
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