In the fonts folder you should not have both bert and ernie and the original fonts with the same extension (*.xtf). If you use Mech fonts the originals must be renamed to *.bak. With other fonts you can rename them to what you want. Like *.fnt (trying to run Thc dash eh?).
Having both B&E and the original fonts with same extension could very well be the reason for your BSOD.
Why dont you try to just build a working non-modded HDD to begin with???
And you shouldn't touch anything in the xboxhdm folder. Only add your C-drive files in linux/C and optionally your E-drive files in linux/E. Then put your eeprom.bin in linux/eeprom. Nothing else! It's easy man, just ask previous users
