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StrictPuppet
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L O T W #5: Poem
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January 18, 2007, 12:12:00 AM »
Well I'll kick it so I dont forget like last LOTW
The Journey
Incoherent musings
Mistaken nuances
Incomplete tasks
Subliminal thoughts
Seductive glances
Yearning desire
Omnipotent spectre
Unrelenting pursuit
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_iffy
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January 18, 2007, 10:17:00 AM »
All aboard the friend-ship
Decisions can
Overwhelm me
Under your
Charming gaze
Happiness never
Eludes me
Because you
Are a
Great friend
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throwingks
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January 18, 2007, 11:11:00 AM »
You spelled dutch wrong.
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hamwbone
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January 19, 2007, 04:46:00 AM »
Blanket of Love
Drowning alive
Under sheets
Tears abundant
Can't breathe
Holding nose
Opening near
Venting covers
Escaped flatulence
Nostrils rejoice
FIN
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wafflez
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January 19, 2007, 09:46:00 PM »
American Way
So tempting
Unbelievable taste
Pride dying
Eating more
Reason subsided
-
Succulent grease
Increasing waist
Zipper broken
Entering diet
Major Breakdown
Ending diet
waalah!
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metaldevil
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January 25, 2007, 09:09:00 AM »
Vote now!
Voting deadline: Thursday, February 1
StrictPuppet:
The Journey
_iffy:
All aboard the friend-ship
hamwbone:
Blanket of Love
wafflez:
American Way
metaldevil:
I'm Cold
Good luck, everyone!
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wafflez
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January 25, 2007, 11:22:00 AM »
hamwbone
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_iffy
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January 25, 2007, 02:29:00 PM »
StrictPuppet
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w2kj
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January 25, 2007, 02:31:00 PM »
hamwbone
...yours gave me such a vivid visual
it sounds like what I do to my wife...
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StrictPuppet
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January 25, 2007, 06:06:00 PM »
That is some awesome work guys....
Following along with his same dark theme from the last LOTW, My vote goes to.....
metaldevil
Its amazing how much can be conveyed in 2 words.
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metaldevil
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February 03, 2007, 01:15:00 AM »
We have a tie between hamwbone and StrictPuppet. Tiebreaker (someone that hasn't voted)?
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Modderxtrordanare
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February 03, 2007, 10:06:00 AM »
Hamwbone
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StrictPuppet
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February 04, 2007, 11:15:00 PM »
Congrats, hamwbone. Your gf/wife is one lucky lady.
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hamwbone
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February 05, 2007, 06:28:00 AM »
im ready for the next one!
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