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[snow rider221]

Well its a little big, so i'll link you to my DeviantArt.

Add me on DeviantArt if you like it !

http://www.deviantar.../view/35307295/

[h34d5h0tz]

looks pretty cool. i like the background paper. the tape looks fine at first glance, but when you stare at it and think about it, it doesnt look as good.

[DsAdvocate]

He's right...Somethin' about the tape. Fine job, yes, but for the size and work, might as well go all the way.

Maybe making the ends a little less straight, adding points like how it gets cut off the dispenser.
Make the tape a little less transparent on the background paper.
Remove the shadowing, if possible, where the tape is and the immediate surroundings.
I dunno...Find a way to add a type of soft texture to it...

Whether you wanna try those tips or not, totally up to you. Those are just my ideas.


EDIT: And I just noticed you did a quick bevel on the poster...Nooooooooo

[SICKdimension]

Lose the airplane, cup, bezel and fix the tape and you'll have a nice piece. Make the tape look old like the background.

[SICKdimension]

QUOTE(Areohbe @ Jun 26 2006, 04:38 AM)

great work on the vector behind the head though....

Ya, did you create that too? I'd like to see just that.

[snow rider221]

QUOTE(SICKdimension @ Jun 26 2006, 04:50 PM)

Ya, did you create that too? I'd like to see just that.

huh uh , i modified celso junior's "abstract dog" from deviantart

[lostboyz]

gots a link? I loathe deviant art and really dont want to do any digging over there

[snow rider221]

http://www.deviantar.../view/25303794/