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[soupy_31]

Alright, so I gave making the bg the same colour as my render a shot, and here is my end result:



Comments?

[Modderxtrordanare]

Thats pretty good man.  Keep it up.

[soupy_31]

QUOTE(Modderxtrordanare @ Dec 11 2005, 04:28 PM)

Thats pretty good man.  Keep it up.

Thanks MX

Oh, and here it is with a different texture on the bg.

[n00bFRAGGER]

Here we go!

A few things that might look better if it were changed. The border around the signature is too thick. A simple 1 pixel border will suffice. Stick with your new texture, but lower it's opacity a little. We don't want to hide that background. The font choice... Simple: You need more fonts. Try this out. I recommend the font: "Freebooter Script" for this. It's a nice cursive font. Increase the size a little of the render so you fill some more of that empty space.

[soupy_31]

Thanks .NF

This font pack is taking FOREVER

[n00bFRAGGER]

Yeah, it's only 6000 fonts...

[h34d5h0tz]

i agree that the border is to thick. and the font and the placement should be changed. i suck at picking fonts, but like nf said, a cursive font or wavey type would fit. as for placement, the corners are generic places. i would put the text on the cloth to the right of her head. the size of the render is fine though, the waving cloths compliment the background.

[soupy_31]

I took both of your advice and here is the result:



You cant really read the text though

[n00bFRAGGER]

The nice thing about the Freebooter Script is that it looks good when there anre capitals and lower case. I recommend that you mess around with "SOUPY" in lower case, and see if it looks any more legible. Also, mess around with the opacity of the stroke on the text as well. Do some layer styles. If you plan to put the text there, then there is no need for the excess space on the right in the signature. You can probably remove a good 50 pixels, maybe more. The border looks much better.

[lostboyz]

i must say soupy youve come a long way, i havent been here in awhile

[soupy_31]

QUOTE(lostboyz @ Dec 12 2005, 02:45 AM)

i must say soupy youve come a long way, i havent been here in awhile

Thanks, lostboyz

Maybe one day ill be as good as you.... one day

Thanks for all the Comments and Criticism, I appreciate it cause this thread alone has already made me a better artist.

[BiReL41r]

Meh, they're all right. I've seen wicked ones of deviant.com

[n00bFRAGGER]

I don't think people on Deviant are photoshop newbies, birel41r.

[soupy_31]

Agreed.. my bad .NF

[n00bFRAGGER]

None of that. It's an open door for fights.